Storyboard & Animatics Analysis

From our storyboard it is clear that our music video is too short and brief. From the sparse use of shots it makes our video look boring and unappealing. We have many ideas for shots to highlight the journey that the lead singer will take and this is not reflected well in the storyboard. We recorded feedback from our target audience to see what they thought of our storyboard. 

Targets to improve:

1. Focus on wider range of shots.
2. Develop our narrative more closely so it tells the story of our artists overcoming his struggles to become a musician.
3. More close-ups of the singer
4. Better use of locations e.g more locations to demonstrate the journey that lead singer is on.
5. Make sure timeline will be much more detailed.